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Jack Palmer

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We Could Be + Additional Poem (Oceans & Raindrops)
« on: April 10, 2010, 03:30:57 PM »
Within existence we all, for now, are lost.
Placed amidst chasm so deep to be din-free.
And no solitaire, no matter how it scintillates, may purchase scaling traction.
It's known family may never be stepped upon
And family we are all.
But as autumn's floor can be but mulch, we too ever decay.
Until, with the free will of winded dust, without consciousness of other,
We swell to high points.
Family is forgotten
And we stand, still only sand grains from bottom.
Yet some would think they see better,
Head and shoulders above.
Look, their legs are all the shorter.
They see more but run less and grasp to lower alcove
So be fearless, and nameless and enter the headless earth crowd.
See we are but a speck within reality's eye of entirety.
And accept our heights are pointless.
As height's of the walls are sightless.

Floods will come, if we are abreast of luck; us warriors of like.
Until chasm's floor is unified in uniforms of ponds
And, drop to drop, bottom rises sinking the too frail to swim,
But floating buoyants, belly up, as the living dead fish of our sea.
I see this, a soul-expensive escape, as a catastrophe of aid.
This, as our willing step with deaths for each made.
Whether top's side is of flat desert, of plateaus without gradient.
Or valley, as basin to a bowl, of kings;
The less of stature to mountain's of gods and we can clamber as we sing.
Songs of those drowned souls,
Of chokes and bubbles and breaths not taken.
This, the price of hand's holds skipped.
For the climb from pit is achievable,
If of patience by others owned.
And fingers of strength not human.
But choice is not the king's second son's
And we do with what we are given.
To scale to a higher fidelity,
And grasp, at once, all intellect's facets and hold to all it's niches.
Both the price and the climb perch still too steep for our time though.
So waiting, in the darkness, I weep.
Watching countless stars pass us by, so slow.
« Last Edit: June 07, 2010, 05:33:21 PM by Jack Palmer »

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Re: We Could Be + Additional Poem (Oceans & Raindrops)
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2010, 08:50:21 AM »
Jack. I'm curious why you formatted your poem this way.  I found it difficult for my eye to follow.  I'd get lost in the text and lose my focus reading the poem.

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Re: We Could Be + Additional Poem (Oceans & Raindrops)
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2010, 02:40:11 PM »
My apologies RCW, i hope this version is a more pleasant read. I also revised some parts.

Pit-Pattering down home's street
At anything but break-neck speed
And in knots, it must be, it's craned so far back.
I watch the sheepish giants swim in open skies,
They reside between whites, grays,
Some laying low up high, sitting hidden in black.

They adhere to, renouncing from, sentences carrying deception;
Burlap sacks of gold and wisdom, upon backs that act
As the blankets of sol's child and the sinking liquid canvas of sky.
A task shown to be easily worth their life of time,
When a peasant's grin is flashed that ought to shine
From the king's lips once his wife delivers to him an heir child.

This present's coin flip they become a jubilee of jaws, of snarls, all hustling.
A rush to be orchestral, giving moments chances to listen to.
Their desertion of height, and breach, and merger, of brother of deep.
But such are the dreamer's dismays, once bottom is found;
The stories told, of marvel and hope,
Hold truth as much as fore-spoken moments held sound.

Single's arms find partners, pressure's puissance the decider.
And without choice and now, freedom or voice, numbers reduce to ones.
Unease sees fit to keep company. Plots and schemes and grudges last,
Even while they sink, their actions past, drowning just as fast.
With cells of glass desire stays vivid and visible.
And each decide they must don their shoes and socks and search
For a yoke less stifling, not ran by collective whim and with more room to breath, and to swim.
And if wishful, or full of dream, chains made by lighter craft and locks that snap with ease.

The swift, with wit and luck, prop ladders from floor to rooftop.
While the plebs use each other, thinking just, and only up.
Sharing infatuations of departure from their congregation.
The only with title as parent to child nations.
Still only custodian to it's own anger and servant to it's rage.
Iced chains swelter, melting, liquify and follow their quarry
Mirroring dissipation to vapors, freed forms and souls now,
The masses ascend, unseen, worth naming the earth's martyrs.
With such a thirst owned to be amidst orange and blue rafters.

The lighter footed stay lofted, while denser, depleted, remain descended.
Sitting tight-lipped for the depths, awaiting turn without light,
Time, as ever, passes and with it impatience, the inductees, the masters now of this congregation.
And hand in hand by choice.
Twos form amidst seas of ones and feuds; speaking with agreed voice.
Plans are drawn up to synchronize all their movements
and show us humans their white foam-topped walls.

There's a god’s basement down here.
With a strength that matches it's own weight in amber and sapphire rafters, and more.
Whilst holding good reason to revere,
For they will be here forever and after.